The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumtion of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates how much electricity was produced and consumed in top ten countries around the world in 2014, and is measured in billion KWH
Overall, it can be seen that all countries produced the most amount of electricity than aconsumed except Germany and that China and the USA produced and consumed the most amount of electricity.
China and the USA produced the most amount of electricity which comprised of 5398 and 4099 respectively. While China used approximately all produced electricity, the USA used for 265 less than produced. Russia produced electricity more that Japan for about 120 KWH which accounted for 1057 and consumtion was at 1038 and 856 respectively.
The production of electricity in India constituted at 871 and consumtion accounted for 698.8. Canada consumed electricity less than produced for about 120. Brazil, France and Germany produced approximately 550 KWH each, while Germany used more more electricity than produced. The least amount of electricity produced Korea Rep. at 485.1 and the consumtion accounted for 449.5.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35119047619 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95227894409 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470238095238 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1127651081 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.375 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 5.23603664747 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257052380725 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114248427037 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753917400187 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172795020536 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962542664694 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.