With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?
Overpopulation and urbanization have led to loss of natural habitat. The fostering of tourism and protection of environment are key benefits produced by preserving the natural appealing sites. Discouragement of the industrialization and building new infrastructure is the mandatory step to be taken to solve this issue of losing the natural and exquisite places.
Firstly, by protecting the natural landscapes, countries can strengthen their economy by tourism. For instance, In Pakistan, Swat is considered eminent, in terms of tourism destination, CONSEQUENTLY, attracting a plethora of visitors to enjoy breathtaking moments from national and international backgrounds. THEREFORE, contributing to a major proportion of the economy. Secondly, PRESERVING NATURE LEADS TO ENVIRONMENTAL protection, ULTIMATELY, PRODUCING long term health benefits, AS AN ILLUSTRATION, statistics revealed, early morning walk in greenery has a paramount beneficial impact on health.Hence, protecting natural inhabitant is necessary for healthy human race.
Countries can TACKLE the alarming issue of losing natural sceneries by discouraging industrialization, IN ORDER TO SAVE NATURE. For instance, CHINA HAS PASSED A LAW ,WHICH PROHIBITS INDUSTRIALIZATION, AS INDUSTORY SECTER PRODUCES KEY LETHAL TOXINS THAT ARE DETRIMENTAL TO ENVIRONMENT. FURTHERMORE, BUILDING new infrastructure has a profound impact on loss of natural inhabitant. Building OF NEW TOWERS, HOSPITALS, SCHOOLS AND OTHER RECREATIONAL CENTERS LEAD TO DAMAGE TO THE ENVIRONMENT. FOR EXAMPLE, IN BALOCHISTAN, A PROVINCE OF PAKISTAN, MANY TREES WERE CUTDOWN TO BUILD CITY TO CURB ISSUES CREATED BY OVERPOPULATION.
To conclude, the issue of losing natural sites is increasing at an alarming rate, raising concerns internationally, solving this problem can lead to the flourishing of tourism and environmental protection. Discouragement of industrialization and infrastructure must be handled cautiously to solve the problem of losing natural spots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13214285714 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77755015904 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9428637322 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.642857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262858523297 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944007405139 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768560022396 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17306178072 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647820516193 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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