Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Environment problem can be control by reducing the use of vehicle fuel. Increasing the cost of the fuel can be a solution from many other solution.
There are a bunch of solution can be applied for solve the pollution from transportation. Setting up a high price on the fossil fuel will make think a person before purchase a car or any other vehicle. Those who are limited in their expenses and income, they will think about the cost of daily maintenance of the car. So it will discourage them to buy a car.
Furthermore Government can set up a high tax rate on personal vehicle. It can be twice or thrice times more then the original price. Also road taxes can be make higher which is mandatory to pay regularly. These approaches could be fruitful to reduce the use of personal vehicle.
Another Way could be the traffic rules. If the fees of the traffic law violation is higher, people not want buy personal car. Because man always do mistakes and for the driving mistakes if they have to count a big number of money, this will prevent them to buy cars. Getting driving license should be more difficult and risen the fees of examination could be some condition that can be apply to discourage to buy personal cars and thus air pollution and traffic problem can be reduce.
In conclusion, actually people want to buy personal cars for comfort and manage their time. So Government should manage all the needs on transportation system for people. The traffic system should be improved. The roads should be more wide and managed in right way. Also the quality and quantity of public transportation should be improved and increased.
- Young drivers are careless and overconfident and too many people are killed in accidents To eliminate this problem we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. 56
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?What other measures do you think might be effective? 61
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeWrite at least 150 words. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...from many other solution. There are a bunch of solution can be applied for solve th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...it will discourage them to buy a car. Furthermore Government can set up a high tax rate o...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e. It can be twice or thrice times more then the original price. Also road taxes can...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ice times more then the original price. Also road taxes can be make higher which is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e driving mistakes if they have to count a big number of money, this will prevent...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... be more wide and managed in right way. Also the quality and quantity of public tran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59617680289 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3474521811 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1578947368 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12703581019 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463168354819 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363501933147 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745274079033 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234763468085 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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