Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
In some part of the world, it is observed that the average weight of people is rising with the increase in weight of people , the health and fitness of people is decreasing. There are many reasons. Behind these problems and different measures can be applied to solve them.
Numerous casus are evluated for the soar in average weight of people. Luxurious life is one of significant cause of increase weight of people. People are not involved in any physical therapy exercise which becomes the reason for increase in weight.similarly intake of excess junk food has increase in people as the cosume enormous amount of junk food, they get problems, in their health . It is not that lack of physical exercise increases weight only but it degrade the health of people. Various health related problems can be seen in people. Likewise, unhealthy food habits is also one of the major reason for health problems. Therefore, people are gaining weight and becoming unhealthy because of their own bad habits.
One of the measures to solve these problems can be regular exercise. As people are being lazy, they are increasing their weight and health problems. So, if they participate in physical exercise or yoga then they can get rid of their problems. Another measure can be healthy food habits and clean environment. For example, one person is taking junk food, alcohol and cigarette and also living in polluted environment then he/she will have many health problems. Therefore, it depends on people how they maintain their health.
In conclusion, there are various causes for rise in weight of people and health problems of people which can be mimised by health problems which can be minimized by different measures.
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- IELTS 10 Test 3 Writing Task 1 - Academic 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03521126761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54023325253 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468309859155 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9246731732 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1176470588 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843939521559 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379256577418 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032787759583 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610529754025 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246622383846 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.