Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
These days, many hold the view that the price of gasoline should be increased in order to solve the current problems, such as traffic jams and pollution. However, there is some uncertainty as to this proposal, and how the problem might be resolved. In this essay I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions.
Admittedly, it is true that higher price of gasoline can theoretically prevent traffic jams and pollution, since it forces drivers to drive less in order to reduce travel cost. This means that there will be fewer cars on the road and then less car exhaust in the air, such as carbon dioxide and sulfur dioxide, two main factors of global warming. Nonetheless, from the aspect of travel convenience, more expensive oil may not be an effective way to diminish the number of private vehicles on the way, as their owners may still decide to travel by car due to the convenience.
On the other hand, as to solutions to traffic congestion, the government should encourage its citizens to take public transportation by building more bus lines and stops, which could enable them to have easy access to buses when going outside. On top of that, the air pollution can be tackled by the exploration of clean energy, such as wind or solar power. Once this environmentally friendly energy is applied to run cars, there will be no car emissions and the global warming can be alleviated.
To summarize, there is no doubt that higher cost of fossil fuels may be a fashion to combat traffic jams and air pollution. At the same time, however, other measures are required because it is not that effective. In the final analysis, therefore, one can only conclude that in order to address the long-standing issues the national authorities should try different ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
These days, many hold the view that the price of gasoline sho...
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Line 2, column 575, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o travel by car due to the convenience. On the other hand, as to solutions to tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nonetheless, so, still, then, therefore, as to, in fact, no doubt, such as, it is true, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82565789474 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68251486366 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6580996047 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135852563858 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483853711313 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370566370658 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818004651874 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254604675213 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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