an increasing in production of consumer goods result in damage of the natural environment what are the causes and possible solution?
In this present era, the population is increasing with high propagation in the world, therefore consumer goods production is on a rise, which creates harmful effects on the environment. This essay will enshrine the main causes of this phenomena, and also give a possible solution for that scenario, which is described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, plenty of harmful things, which generated from this situation. First and foremost, The production of goods increased, which creates pollution through its manufacturing process, which harms humans, animals, and birds. Furthermore, that production project consumed the valuable lands, which is located in city areas, therefore the prices of that land become high and people cannot afford it. For example, all production houses were located in urban areas which have a high rate of land, and people remain without a house at there. these are the main two problems of more production.
On the other hand, solving this issue is extremely difficult, but it can be solved by few steps. Firstly, if the government starts the recycling process of consumer goods, then that will reduce some amount of pollution in particular regions. Secondly, The new production project will construct in the outer side of city or in the countryside, which will probably reduce the rate of land. For instance, since the government of India started a movement of “no factory in the city”, then the prices of house and land in urban areas declined, which was written by the Times of India.
To conclude, while more production of consumer goods fulfill people needs, that creates problems too such as pollution and higher rate of land, that will solved by recycling of that goods and factory will build in rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16027874564 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62391316504 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7150104498 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137462034605 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050572131753 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484310304269 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990249354684 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054325635712 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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