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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

Nowadays, environmental problems have been a trending topic. Ordinary people are said to have no impacts on environmental improvements, while huge organizations and authorities can make several differences, which I do not support thanks to several reasons. Firstly, it is no doubt that governments and big companies have more enormous impacts on the environment. An ordinary citizen, however, can provide a means of environment protection by raising the public's awareness. In other words, every each need to understand the potential risks they might face if he or she keeps destroying their habitats. For example, leaflets, brochures, or billboards about environmental issues should be sent to every household family to understand its importance. As a result, the chance of better their surrounding environment might increase. Secondly, I am of the opinion that people can do something to better the environment by recycling. It means the public should make attempts to reuse everything from an item they bought, namely wrapping papers, boxes, and bags. Such attempts could be considered epitomes of people's environmental protection efforts. According to some reports conducted in Vietnam, millions of garbage were released into the environment last year. Had those things been reused for different purposes, the significant changes would have made for our environment. Thus, the environment could be improved thanks to those actions. In conclusion, it is undeniable that people, not only governments or big corporations, can make differences to help the environment in many ways, such as raising awareness about the environment and recycling household waste.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...f environment protection by raising the publics awareness. In other words, every each n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2837.0 1615.20841683 176% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 8.15229885057 5.12529762239 159% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.69451324558 2.80592935109 274% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488505747126 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.458826986 49.4020404114 479% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.909090909 106.682146367 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717681813646 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391377680558 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405226637508 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717681813646 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.17 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 30.58 12.4159519038 246% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 36.5 9.78957915832 373% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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