Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only government and large companies can make a difference to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Today it is true that our planet is in dire situation. But it is considered that people do not help to reducing problem of environment, while other believed that merely government as well as enterprises companies can change this situation. But in my point of view, it is wrong as well as I disagree this aforementioned statement.
To commence with, there are many environmental issues like global warming, plastic waste, deforestation, excessive industrialization as well as reckon. These problems are created by individuals of the whole world. The major problem of plastic waste is the present issue. If this problem creates by people but also solved by individuals. For instance, if people collects the plastic products like bottles, plates as well as plastic bags ectera. For this , they used the dustbins and plastic polythene. At least, individuals clean their own town and city.
On the other hand, authorities and companies also help to declining this issues. Government also made law to reduce this problem. To epitome, they ban the use of plastic waste as well as start the program to awear the public for use of plastic which are harmful to the environment.
To recapitulate, If government, companies as well as individuals worked together then environment problems are overcome. Not only one do this work .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as well as plastic bags ectera. For this , they used the dustbins and plastic poly...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... are overcome. Not only one do this work .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, at least, for instance, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16279069767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01472667916 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4367215512 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116677464976 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043072861489 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574139171402 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092511904493 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663587625877 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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