Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that solely authorities and huge businesses have the ability to bring a positive result in protecting and saving natural habitats, while it may lead to nothing when the residents do. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with this statement and this essay will analyze the reasons.
To begin with, the argument in favor of avoiding inhabitants having responsibility in improving the environment would be that people often ignore a small change when they try to help the environment such as throwing garbage into the right place or recycling things. From their mind, they believe that such things do not lead to a result at all. I think it is a short-sighted view. If the whole world had the consciousness in doing these little actions, the world would not be faced with plenty of serious problems nowadays that pollution is a primary example.
Moreover, this will be counter-productive if only governments and large companies are responsible for conserving the environment. It has a possibility to become meaningless if the local residents are not aware of the habitats. Despite the effort from protecting the natural balances of governments and large companies, some people continue to express their carelessness about this and focus on their living that not much affected by pollution or climate change in their point of view. It is the main reason that causes dramatic issues for the environment that have bad effects not only on humans but also on all of the species on Earth.
In conclusion, I mainly argue that leaving the responsibility only government and companies is not an efficient way in improving the environment. In my opinion, there should be an effort of everyone to tackle these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... effects not only on humans but also on all of the species on Earth. In conclusion, I mai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06993006993 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.987921305 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1011738122 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161528285193 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522523129243 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426637325998 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904186529858 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0099210087893 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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