Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing the responsibility of the governments, cash-cow businesses, and individuals for the environmental phenomenon. Although some people assume that the authorities should mainly shoulder this obligation, I personally believe that each individual to these environmental problems and will give my rational conclusion in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, the ecological phenomenon become an alarming issue in the present days such as climate change, air pollution, bushfires, etc. It is irresponsible to state that only governments and successful organizations repel these hazards without residents' effort. Secondly, each person is a culprit that affects adversely the environmental issues. For an instance, most surveys and records in the US implied that the human habitat contributes a heinous influence on ecology and biology. Thirdly, if individuals do not give a hand to ameliorate the environmental situation, it can create more and more pressure on the government and companies.
To be clear, without habitants' awareness about ecology, many campaigns and programs of the government easily failed. Moreover, it costs the government and large companies an arm and a leg to ease this problem without residents' funds. Noticeably, people may not appreciate and respect the value of the environment because they do not any duties in these issues. It will be meaningless if the resident doesn't abide by the saving environment policies from the government regardless of how strict they are. With the joint liability from every individual in the nation, we can accelerate the improvement surrounding these problems. Perhaps the best example of this would be Singapore, due to the cooperation of both governments and residents, this nation become one of the cleanest countries
on the globe. Finally, the amelioration in environmental quality can upgrade the living standard of all individuals in the nations so that is the reason why we need to collaborate to reduce the negative phenomenon in the environment as soon as possible.
In conclusion, it is obvious that government and successful organizations need to have more responsibility for these agendas due to their status and wealth. In my opinion, the environmental problem is a common liability for each resident in one nation and cooperation can force us to ease this thorny issue.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... It will be meaningless if the resident doesnt abide by the saving environment policie...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...become one of the cleanest countries on the globe. Finally, the amelioration in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50948509485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21995243037 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3824809483 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0625 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182700527797 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562676927643 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499705671024 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927552656698 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457986728828 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... It will be meaningless if the resident doesnt abide by the saving environment policie...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...become one of the cleanest countries on the globe. Finally, the amelioration in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50948509485 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21995243037 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3824809483 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0625 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182700527797 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562676927643 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499705671024 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927552656698 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457986728828 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.