Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally argued among the most of the people that personal effort con not bring positive change on world environment, only countries and large investment organization can make large difference. This essay agrees that respective government authority and companies can create huge difference in regards to positive climate change. Firstly, this essay discuss how investment and sensitization can bring remarkable result on climate change.

In regards to the positive concern, to create environment friendly to the world scenario, investment of large authority (government and big companies) are showing their consciousness to improve the secure environment. Human being nowadays are experiencing multiple activity related to climate change that allows them to installation of equipment to understand the ongoing weather status. As a result of that, every responsible authority are supporting to maintain environment in an upward situation by preserving all the natural resources responsible for person with environment. For example, a recent study conducted by Tribhuwan University found that, 87% of world contribution in regards to bring positive climate change is from the joint contribution of multiple countries and companies.

On the other hand, awaring people in different level have supported in many ways in regards to control their behavior, which may have further possibility of environmental degradation. People from different sectors nowadays are paying maximum attention to sensitize citizens of different areas on the importance of good environment through different campaigning activities. For instance, this is most evident in my country that, ministry of environment here in Nepal allocate annual funds in regards to organize multiple awareness activity related to ongoing climate change.

In conclusion, though the essence of good environment is appreciated by the world around and the contribution from respective countries and different multinational companies have paid enough to create positive result on ever changing environmental situation with the help of hues investment and different sensitizing activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...nd companies can create huge difference in regards to positive climate change. Firstly, this ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...remarkable result on climate change. In regards to the positive concern, to create environ...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...y found that, 87% of world contribution in regards to bring positive climate change is from t...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...erent level have supported in many ways in regards to control their behavior, which may have ...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ent here in Nepal allocate annual funds in regards to organize multiple awareness activity re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.3376753507 360% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94516129032 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12610604776 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8395356615 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.545454545 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126599188944 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576710371167 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695980225357 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848589621939 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840000036459 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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