More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is certainly true that, most of the family nowadays prefer to have babies in later stage of life in comparison to the past. This essay argued that the advantage of this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate that the person who prefer to have children in their late life would have more strength financially to support their children, followed by an analysis of poor parenthood as a primary disadvantages.
With regards to the advantage, each individuals at the present moment are more conscious relating to have personal economic development in regards to support their children in later stage of life. Stable financial income allow them to support their children from multiple aspects and they would not have to face any financial crisis during their parenthood. As a result of that, newly parenting life would able to minimize risk factors associate financially and also helps to boost up their family relationship. For example, this is most evident in my country that, employee from multinational company and top level managerial post prefer to make their children after little longer time then the practice followed by the past.
Those opposed to this say that, late parenthood would possibly create more stress in the personal as well as family life. They are busy on professional career and get less flexible time to support their children in regards to make them feel happy in many ways, which further creates the gap between parent and the children. For instance, a recent study conducted by the government of Nepal shows that, person who get less attention from their parent in the childhood stage would have situation of being convict in offensive activity in comparison to the child who get proper nurture from their parents.
In conclusion, it is indeed the fact that more individual at present moment are convinced to make their children after experiencing stable financial condition which creates little longer time than the past life clearly outweigh the flawed argument of poor parenthood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...flexible time to support their children in regards to make them feel happy in many ways, whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1419939577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60745204069 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510574018127 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.415802742 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.727272727 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266200788386 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116079525782 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536939046501 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185591724739 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638846678785 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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