Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
There has been formed a heated debate , whether , or not , should the intelligent machines used more broadly in facilities rather than people . this essay supports the former view because people beings have unlimited capabilities to create due to critical thinking and creativity . Firstly , this essay will discuss assumed benefits of exploitation of robots widely as increasing of productivity ratio. Secondly , it will analyze the reason why people should take the first position in this comparison.
On no account should the general public ignore the fact , that intelligent machines are not vital objects , they do not have the senses of depression and lassitude . Subsequently , robots can only focus on work completely without battles with conscience as people used to do. However , it is clear that highly motivated beings can complete the mission more faster and better that robots do . due to the fact the that people's behaviour can not be emphasized too much as sometimes people get crazy accomplishing the work they must do.
On the other hand , the supporters of applying people in the first places base their opinion on characteristics available for humans only . To put it differently , people are more likely to think out of the limits . it can be exemplified by the fact that robots are programmed to complete one's mission , while the real masterminds are controlling them . As a prime example , having conducted social research among the programmers of MIT university , scientists have revealed that 80% of surveyed use their robots with domestic chores only.
In conclusion , i am firmly convinced that robots do not have an even infinitesimal opportunity to compete with human beings , because of absence of characteristics intrinsic to people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30685920578 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95641491995 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7709614898 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135388847745 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488960715739 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392359646814 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804070511312 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197406421376 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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