International sporting events make an important contribution to internal peace. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, many hold the view that global sporting competitions are beneficial to world peace. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that it may be useless and even detrimental to internal peace. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and give my opinion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that worldwide sporting events make the participants from different nations know each other better. As the events provide various athletes with a same place to compete in, they would have a golden opportunity to know and talk frequently with athletes abroad. In addition, athletes from different countries would respect each other after the competition as every participant is the expert in the field of their own country. For examples, runners from Africa, especially some developing countries could show their talent in running and obtain the world’s resepect.
On the other hand, nevertheless, the intensive competition may arouse some violence conflicts. Since the goal of joining the game is to win, participants who represent their nation would try their best to win the champion but the process and result may make the audience piss off. For examples, it’s common to see the fans of two different nation’s football clubs fighting after the game just because one team lost the game.
To summarise, there is no doubt that international sporting events make the athletes know more about and respect each other. At the same time, nonetheless, violence conflict brought by it is not to be neglected. In the final analysis, one can only conclude that the effect of the competitions to internal peace is positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
Nowadays, many hold the view that global sporting competiti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, for example, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14552238806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77175019279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4775753314 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167841293461 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606523945714 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060915160873 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10823813988 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065341560448 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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