International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
In my opinion, I suppose that international tourism has given large advantages on local inhabitants and the invironment such as increasing economy, understanding culture and developing communication.
Nowaday people travel a lots in over the worl as morden livestyle and they will spend their money for countries that they visit. Therefore, international tourism have brought a increasing income for local people so they can get better invironment in their life.
As you know that the international tourism come from many countries that they show many their kind of good behaviour that the local people can learn such as get on the line to playing or eating, do not speak loudly in public places and so on. That will support for the second idea which is understanding the culture. Finally, if travelling people come with different languages so the local people can learn and practise more in languages, they will grow sharply their communication with people worldwide.
In conclusion, I support that international tourism will create the amount of benefit for local inhabitants and the environment there is an increased economy, understanding of culture and the development of communication among local people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, therefore, i suppose, in conclusion, kind of, such as, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39790575916 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07316909742 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3263163904 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.285714286 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2199649019 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111832805726 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935076270276 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157815121764 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052851015163 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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