International tourism is now the world’s largest industry .Unfortunately, this creates tension rather than understanding culture of other people. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?
International tourism as the biggest industry in the world right now creates tension rather than introduce culture of other people. This phenomenon is caused by industry of tourism that only focus to get much profits and there is no involvement of local society in the international tourism policy.
In this era, tourism exists as an important part of modern society, it always gives interesting opportunity to visit beautiful places in rural area for citizen in the big cities. It is not only about special offer, the price is also affordable so there will be many demands to apply the offer. This strategy is not accompanied with whole explaining about local culture, it is clear will happen tension between foreigners and local people. For example, the case ever happened in Kajang, one of tribe in South Sulawesi province, at the time foreigners denied rules of Kajang tribe by did not wear black outfit when into holy site, the place of ancestors. This triggered conflict between local people and tourists with staff of tourism ministry.
Participation of local people in design some rules about tourism did not get much portion. Tourism policies were usually only focus on how to advertise local tourism in order to increase the number of tourists. Local society should be involved because the regulations of tourism will get details information about local culture, so the problems about tourism can be solved. Evidently, the government of Indonesia tried to consult with local culture like Balinese and Baduy tribe, one of tribe in Banten province to make tourism policy for 2018. This policy contributed to incline the number of tourist in Indonesia from 500 thousand tourists in 2015 to 2 million tourists in 2020. Besides that, positive impact of the regulation is environment and culture are preserved.
In conclusion, negative effect of international tourism is tension with local society. This happens due to this industry focus to get profits and there is no contribution of the society. If it is possible, these have to be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ustry of tourism that only focus to get much profits and there is no involvement of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1369047619 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67870370044 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53869047619 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0683966892 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191010352203 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753242939699 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941403249559 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155938570032 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110462772854 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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