In many countries, schools have several problems with student’s behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
The habits of students result some problems in the schools in some nations. Lack of attention of their parent and curriculum that still using old method are the causes of this problems. Meanwhile the solutions of this issue are parents have to get more role and the schools have to change their curriculum that appropriate with this era.
Less of enthusiastic of parents will describe unbalanced mindset to students, this condition is aggravated with the schools still believing to use old methods. These points definitely will become seriously problems that bother students in the school. For example, based on research as to education in European countries in 2020, there was negative impact to scholars if less of attention from their parents and old method used by the school. This impact was the students became individualist person as they feel did it anything by their self.
Meanwhile, the schools have to learn using modern ways and give more role to parents in order to overcome these problems. These alternative solutions will increase student’s confidence and they will be fun when running their education. This situation have been examined by expert of education in Finland, one of the best education country in the world. The experts said using technology method also involving parents increased quality of education, especially for student of junior high school and senior high school.
In conclusion, lack of parent’s attention and using old ways are the causes that can be solved by giving more role to parents and combining with modern methods of education. If it is possible, this issue has to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15413533835 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65632032152 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507518796992 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5656895173 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194385694082 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080122422058 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367723423941 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133088195335 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430920271688 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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