International travel is becoming cheaper, and coutries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
In this cutting edge time, thanks to transportable innovation, oversea travel is more affordable for foreigners and some nations are welcoming more visitors. Although, this tendency can causes many negative effects to these countries, they are still overshadowed by the merits.
On the one hand, there are many bad effects which can cause environmental problems when increasing tourists from various places. The first and foremost is that this tendency will escalate migrants who are from a different culture, and even if they act responsibly, the sheer number of them can cause damage. Besides, due to cultural differences, some visitors often lack respect for local traditions and customs, hence they behaved inappropriately. For example, after being recognized by UNESCO as a wold heritage site in 1994, Ha Long Bay became one of the most attractive places in Vietnam. However, the more travelers, the more trash was littered here due to carelessness as well as lacking of awareness of outer people, and this affects severely to the aesthetic of Ha Long.
Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that the benefits from tourism far outweigh the drawbacks. First of all, it boosts the GDP of the economy of host destinations by generating income, and that is why it make up a crucial proportion for a nation especially developing countries. In addition, opening doors also helps create thousands of jobs for citizens such as staffs in hotels, bars, or travel agency. For instant, Thailand is a developing southeast nations which take advantage of tourism to grow their revenue and now it is described as one of the development success stories. Last but not least, traveling spurs government to invest on infrastructure to brings a safe and convenient places with advanced facilities for foreigners, then the locals can have a chance to experience these best utilities.
In conclusion, tourism is not only a vital activity but also a pivotal industry for a nation in this globalization era, though it can cause many demerits when inviting more foreigners, the positive effects can eclipse the downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...e visitors. Although, this tendency can causes many negative effects to these countrie...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...y generating income, and that is why it make up a crucial proportion for a nation es...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22189349112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95114005396 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62426035503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.482900201 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.769230769 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149387310995 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499901316111 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047187467528 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875117054317 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018995649585 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.