International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?
These days, it is true that the growth of the international travel industry has brought several benefits to both visitors and the host nations which receive them. Despite some obvious drawbacks of this development, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, the downsides of welcoming foreign visitors are varied. First and foremost, travelers are inclined to be confronted with such unexpected issues as being overcharged and scammed due to their ignorance about market price. Secondly, in terms of the host country, issues of water disposal, pollution, and excessive construction of hotels tend to exert negative impacts on the environment. Many beach resorts in Viet Nam, for instance, have become apartments to accommodate mass tourism from other countries that leads to landscapes’ destruction. And the most likely drawback to consider is that international travel might pose a threat to social health. Especially, amid the pandemic of Covid-19, both visitors and local residents might run a higher risk of contracting contagious melodies.
On the other hand, I suppose the merits of travelling to other countries would eclipse those aforementioned demrits. For visitors, travelling abroad is a way for them to broaden their horizons, meet people from different backgrounds and gain numerous fascinating experiences of exotic cultures as well. Another reason for this view is that the influx of foreign tourists coming to host country would evidently enhance tourism industries, doing wonders for that country’s economy. They are likely to expend more on foodstuff, accommodation, transportation, shopping, and so forth. As a result, employees in these sectors generally benefit from higher wages and improved living standards.
In conclusion, from my perspective, the positives of international tourism are more notable than its negatives.
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| 2021-06-30 | Greenbamboo | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6048951049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06103854372 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4313948747 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174779637032 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505952230339 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437462102711 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947508396206 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348040483109 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.