The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
It is controversial that internet can help us to keep in touch with people around the globe. Nevertheless, some people think that this advanced technology has quarantined people from the social life and made them become more individualistic. From my perspective, I do agree that internet has negatively effects to human's lives, but besides its cons, it also brings a great number of pros owing to these following reasons.
On the first hand, it is an undeniable fact that due to the existence of the Internet, people have tendency to have social life problems today. Each person has their own mobile phone for personal use such as chatting, gaming or online shopping. With a great amount of interesting and attractive applications, they can stay glued with their hi-tech appliances hour-by-hour and sequester from the social life. As a result, people have become less socialized since they spend too much time face-to-face with their devices instead of eye-to-eye interactions or conversations, which breaks the bond between each habitants and abandons people from society. Moreover, cyber-addiction increases because of the overusing the internet. Internet is not only a storage of information, it is also a place where cyber-bullying, violence, and bad programs happen. Being dependent on the internet makes people more socially isolated. According to some documents, a lot of families no longer spend time together, they are separated from each other and the percentage of children have vision issue has been abruptly surged due to the development of the internet. Lacking of anticipates with others can cause to humans to lose interpersonal skills and prevent them from communicating with others properly. Consequently, people will be depressed and have emotional matters if this phenomenon still occurs in such a very long time.
On the other hand, people get benefited due to the development of technology, especially the internet. To be more specific, internet had helped people to connect with others around the world without the boundaries of distances. In the past, it is much harder and time-consuming to connect to friends or relatives than nowadays. By using some features that are provided by the internet like Facebook or Skype, people now can connect with person they want via a screen. The time-consuming of traditional communication will be soon eradicated with the using of internet. Moreover, with the widespread popularity of internet, people with an internet-connected device such as a mobile will be able to get access to a huge storage of information. Every latest news or events will be updated immediately on the site with detailed information. Besides that, just by a click, people can stay home and buy whatever they want. Hence, human's lives can be better day by day with the comfort and convenience of the internet.
In conclusion, everything has its own perks. Internet will bring benefits to humanity or not that depends on how human use it. I believe that if it is used for right purpose or in the appropriate portion, internet will be the greatest tool ever of all time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2610.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 504.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0302471779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 825.3 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3101889437 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.16 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273511557062 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786337539284 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516825384562 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154841467558 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076319017781 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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