The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialize.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Internet is the modern day technology which is allowing us to stay in virtual contact with friends and family around world but also separating us from the human relationships and social life. In my opinion, the technology has invented new routes of staying in connection throughout the world but the extent of usage depends on us.
Any new technology invented has both pros and cons. So, how we use it, is always based on our intelligence and perception. The internet is connecting people through several computer applications such as facebook, Watsapp, Sype etc. These applications are connecting not only through voice calls via mobile phone but also allow video calling facilities. For instance, we can contact our parents and friends while working in different city or country within minutes. The conferencing facility also gives us the opportunities for contacting and conversing with more than single individual at a moment.
On the other hand, the technology is also separating people from the human contact. For example, parents are sending message to their children who are playing video games in their bedroom to have food. The applications are facilitating for having thousands of friends around the world. However, we are losing intimacy with our closest friends in the neighborhood. Technological era has not only improved the work experience with computers but also raised their urge for Excellency. Thus, people are becoming busy for social contact which also leading to declined human relationships and partnerships. People lacking in personal and love life is an excellent example for this situation.
In conclusion, the people should utilize the technology in proper manner to connect with people and society rather than overusing to move away from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32028469751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84853160298 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6544944992 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257741818488 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800609381276 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518885419965 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15581264158 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377131326372 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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