The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, people do not have especially time spent to meet and chat with their relative because they are busy with their work. In this case, the Internet is proved as a boon and built our strong relationship with people to people. I strongly agree with the given statement that internet joined the person kinship in anywhere.
To begin with, nowadays people have to work in their life to survive and also, they have to keep up the relationship between their kinsfolk. Both things are impossible to preserve for us without the internet. Only Social media has such a power, it can save the contact with each other. Does not matter where you are, just your friendship can be managed. Let’s see an example for best understanding, Dhruvil, who is my best friend, went to America. We studied together from 1th to 12th. Now my friend has been living so far from me for 3 years, but our relationship is still good because of the internet. We talk to together in the social application called WhatsApp through the internet and share our problems and happiness talks. However, I cannot talk to them on a daily basis, but our relationship is making a strong day by day through the internet. That is why I am saying that the internet is made a significant part of our life as joining the contact with each other.
On the other hand, my ancestor told me, if you want to build well the connection between your relative, you have to do help each other. But the main question is that if your friend or relative who is living so far from you, you want to help them. How? Do not worry, the online network gives us help in anyhow. It does not depend on where you are, but your work is done with accuracy. For instance, it is Bebli that is living so far from me. My IELTS preparation is ongoing and a few days ago, I got a problem related to writing task 2 so I made a video call to my friend and we talked face to face by using the Skype application. I got a positive solution within a couple of minutes and our bond of relationship is making strong due to help each other. In spite of being away, we remain connected. In short, we can say that we can help each other by the internet only to save the relationship.
In conclusion, the internet brings many advantages to our lives. However, we should spend our time wisely using the internet. We have to use this technology is beneficial because our upcoming offspring learn a positive thing from us and our family connection is running for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47587719298 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49685763576 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489035087719 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0826104798 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.64 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.24 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30039525419 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864857273944 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551705743183 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181625425724 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055214284269 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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