The Internet contains a lot of information. However, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
While the internet has become a source of available data, it is considered that it also contains information that is fake or outdated. I totally agree with the given statement. In this essay, I will mention several reasons to prove this view.
To begin with, one of the main reasons why I advocate that online information is sometimes incorrect or lacks authenticity is there is a great amount of knowledge and data that are updated many years ago, this means that it might not work in today’s developing world. For example, theories related to Mathematics, Science, or Biology which are revealed hundreds of years ago, have been restudied and adjusted by advanced knowledge. Secondly, media companies are more inclined to profit from unverifiable data through false reports and rumors. This generally works with the common objective is to capture people’s curiosity.
In addition, the Internet nowadays is widely used in marketing products and services, and the problem is that their quality can be exaggerated. We can easily see numerous advertisements are pervasive on TV, social media, and other sources. This can be justified by the purpose that is used to attract customers’ attention, therefore they might buy appealing items. It will not the controversial issues if the information appears in advertisements is significantly amplified, and it does not match with real experiences. For instance, some advertisements maintain reviews and comments of buyers, which can be published in the most perfect ways by the company itself to increase the number of sales but the quality of goods is completely different compared to clients' reviews.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the internet plays a huge role in providing information, there can be some cases when the given data can be wrong and used to attract attention for various purposes.
- People tend to work longer hours nowadays Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people regard video games as harmless fun or even as a useful educational tool Others however believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them In your opinion do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits 89
- Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people believe that traveling is a valuable experience others say it is a waste of time and money Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- In some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past Do you think this is a positive or negative development 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 345, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26510067114 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94905354403 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7132915504 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201167400608 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726168295021 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063149863022 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129591190056 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944245149991 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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