The internet could revolutionize the world in the future if everyone could have easy access to all information that is available o the world wide web Do you agree or disagree with this statement؟
It seems that the world tends to be revolutionized in the future by the Internet; this could be happened by easily access all people to all information which is available on the WWW. I do not completely agree with this theory and assume other factors could be effective as well.
One of the essential items which may highly affect the world revolution by the Internet would be the devices by which people are able to connect to the Internet and either upload or download the data. There are some third world countries that are not affluent enough to prepare the primary infrastructures to access the Internet, and it cannot be anticipated to achieve that in future that much it will be able to alter their society as well as the world significantly. For instance, some of the South African countries are that poor that if the authorities make the accessibility of the Internet all over the region, there may be some citizens who are not able to buy a smartphone or a computer to use that. So these in accessibilities may take action as a restricting and preventing factor.
On the other hand, the presence of the infrastructure and smart devices may be necessary but not efficient. In other words, the ability to the Internet highly productively can be considered as another important item that could lead the world into revolution. For example, some knowledge such as dominating on the English language, the knowledge of ICDL and available a vast number of computer experts will be essential to cause the societies and consequently the world to be revolutionized.
In conclusion, the accessibility to the Internet and its information will be necessary but may not be efficient to revolute all the world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the world significantly. For instance, some of the South African countries are that poor t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99905316046 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491408934708 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2973082606 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272722325997 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127118427015 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990807020148 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207224854792 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108282417422 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the world significantly. For instance, some of the South African countries are that poor t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87628865979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99905316046 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491408934708 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2973082606 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272722325997 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127118427015 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990807020148 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207224854792 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108282417422 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.