The internet has transformed lives and economics but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The emergence of technologies that have been growing fast granting us with the easiness and effectiveness in doing the plethora of activities. Some people admit that the internet, as the one of remarkable inventions devised by articulate people, has changed our lives and economy positively. Others just think of it in reverse ways in which generate the individuals with identical acts.
The technologies that exist in our workplace, such as: computers, printers and scanners, effectively contribute to our business. The productivity has raised out whilst lowering our work hours. Indeed, in econom...
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whether 'everybody will think
whether 'everybody will think and behave in the same way.'
I'm honestly not sure about the question, so I just made it in different point of view in the second paragraph.
*Could you explain me what was it supposed to be?
Thanks
You were talking about the
You were talking about the advantages of technologies in the second paragraph. This is not related to the topic.
You can move the third paragraph to the second paragraph which is about the '...in the same way'.
While you can argue in the third paragraph something about: '...not in the same way'. People still keep their own way even though the Internet is turning the world into a global village.
Then give your own opinion in the fourth paragraph.
The emergence of technologies that have been growing fast granting us with the easiness and effectiveness in doing the plethora of activities.
Description: what is the verb for 'The emergence'? can you re-write this sentence?
Others just think of it in reverse ways in which generate the individuals with identical acts.
Description: check books how to use 'preposition + which'
is less likely to be happened
is less likely to happen
flaws:
The second paragraph is not related to the argument: whether 'everybody will think and behave in the same way.'
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