The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
The topic of regulating the Internet is undoubtedly argumentative. While there are a growing number of people advocating the idea of controlling this global source of information and communication, numerous others argue that the Internet should be left deregulated. From my standpoint, the proponents of both perspectives have their justifications. However, I believe the Internet should not be used without any interference.
In the first place, both these statements will be addressed. As for Internet-controlling supporters, they hold the view that the influence of the Internet on the physical world is immeasurable. By way of exemplifying, without moderation, fraud and other cybercrime will escalate on the Internet, consequencing in an increasing number of victims of these evils. Concerning the antagonists, they keep the faith that freedom in the virtual world should be respected. The intervention by any means may, according to them, circumvent this privilege. Freedom of speech can be a perfect case in point. In the name of managing the Internet, governments may conceal information that is unfavorable to them and not let their citizens know the verities.
As regards my opinion, there is a variety of explanations for controlling the Internet. Together with the aforementioned reason, it is worth pointing out that the Internet profoundly affects the comprehensive development of children and teenagers. Therefore, without proper administration, the next generations may be infested with deviant thoughts through inappropriate content. Violence, pornography, and hate-filled messages, to mention but a few. These disturbing things can sometimes mess up youngsters' presumptions of the world.
In conclusion, one could claim that the Internet should be no interference whatsoever in order to protect its freedom. Nevertheless, from my point of view, there should be online moderation since the impact of the Internet on real life, especially on children and teenagers, is immense.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as for, as regards, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69899665552 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49447916865 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6902784782 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30786313888 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880175773482 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682547891248 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189665736528 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645340683732 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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