introduction-Modern lifestyle of individual undergone the dramatic change over a couple decade.presently,messes use smartphone,tablet and other gadgets.which spend their precious time.Here i would like to account for negative effects of this happening on the individual.
on the one hand,There are multifarious negative outcomes of smartphone trend on the youngsters.first and foremost,children spend their maximum time on smartphone rather than education.for example,children watch many voilant video on internet which make them aggressive.beside this,Technology is responsible to generate gap with youngsters and elders.
introduction-Modern lifestyle of individual undergone the dramatic change over a couple decade.presently,messes use smartphone,tablet and other gadgets.which spend their precious time.Here i would like to account for negative effects of this happening on the individual.
on the one hand,There are multifarious negative outcomes of smartphone trend on the youngsters.first and foremost,children spend their maximum time on smartphone rather than education.for example,children watch many voilant video on internet which make them aggressive.beside this,Technology is responsible to generate gap with youngsters and elders.
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| 2018-06-04 | dandiwal jaspreet | 22 | view |
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- introduction-Modern lifestyle of individual undergone the dramatic change over a couple decade.presently,messes use smartphone,tablet and other gadgets.which spend their precious time.Here i would like to account for negative effects of this happening on 22
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 545.0 1615.20841683 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 81.0 315.596192385 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.72839506173 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.0 4.20363070211 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.68469312141 2.80592935109 167% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 176.041082164 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.802469135802 0.561755894193 143% => OK
syllable_count: 169.2 506.74238477 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 272.5 106.682146367 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.600819492964 0.244688304435 246% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.537172741582 0.084324248473 637% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.432413082908 0.0667982634062 647% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.537172741582 0.151304729494 355% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.432413082908 0.056905535591 760% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 13.0946893788 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 22.64 12.4159519038 182% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.05 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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