Nowdays, family are not at close as they spend our time on technology. causes and solution
Lifestyle of individual have undergone the dramatic change over a couple decade. Presently, family spend our more time on technology rather than kith and kins.
On the one hand, movement to people one place to other place. It is bigger problem nowday. which people can not talk with our relatives and friends. moreover, technology is leading to live separate all family member. For Example, today all individual have smartphone, computer and tablets. which people spend our maximum time on these device.
On the other hand, Modern lifestyle is speadly increase day by day. people are only focus on their lifestyle rather than our family. Further more, rising genaration gap is big cause for this happening. people do not try to communicate with other age group like as, children, elders, teachers.
There are numerous remedial measures can be taken to solve this problem. mobile phone could be useful and easy way to communicate with kith and kins who live in other place. beside this, people should give one day in week for their family and orgnaise some special occasion to spend time together.
Family is part and parcel in our life. people should be joint responsibility to make well relation with family. without families and affection is like ship without shellers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...her place. It is bigger problem nowday. which people can not talk with our relatives ...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ot talk with our relatives and friends. moreover, technology is leading to live separate...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... have smartphone, computer and tablets. which people spend our maximum time on these ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have smartphone, computer and tablets. which people spend our maximum time on these ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this device' or 'these devices'?
Suggestion: this device; these devices
... which people spend our maximum time on these device. On the other hand, Modern lifestyle...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...festyle is speadly increase day by day. people are only focus on their lifestyle rathe...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...on gap is big cause for this happening. people do not try to communicate with other ag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p like as, children, elders, teachers. There are numerous remedial measures can...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mobile
...res can be taken to solve this problem. mobile phone could be useful and easy way to c...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
... kith and kins who live in other place. beside this, people should give one day in wee...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... Family is part and parcel in our life. people should be joint responsibility to make ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...lity to make well relation with family. without families and affection is like sh...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l relation with family. without families and affection is like ship without shell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42574999506 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7003906446 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16124080463 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053877940719 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708096682019 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980410428192 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377166043093 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.17 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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