Nowdays, People buy a lot of thing even though they do not really need them. By is it happening . Is it a positive and negative trend for the individual and society.
Lifestyle of individual undergone the dramatic change over a couple decade. Presently, A huge individual purchase maximum things and they do not really need them. But here i would describe several reasons, positive view and negative views.
On the one hand, There are numerous reason behind this happening. Such as, Advertisement, discount and show off. For example, Advertisement is responsible to this. Thus when people watch new things and products on advertisement. They want to purchase that.
On the other hand, Individual want to uplift there living standard. Beside this, In modern era everyone follow famous celebrities and they want to be same lifestyle. Furthermore, which things purchased by people and these all profit goes to company.
Moreover, A large number amount of negative views. People waste their precious time and money yo buy these thing. As it is, These thing make them spendthrift. It is make rubbish and pollution Which create many environmental concern. For example, Plastic bags are not properly burned in the soil and release harmful gases.
To recapitulate, Shopping has become part and parcel to everyone. They want to buy new thing daily and it is important to our household and society.
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| 2018-06-13 | dandiwal jaspreet | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
..., Advertisement is responsible to this. Thus when people watch new things and produc...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ide this, In modern era everyone follow famous celebrities and they want to be same lifestyle. Fur...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...te their precious time and money yo buy these thing. As it is, These thing make them spendt...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'These things'?
Suggestion: This thing; These things
...and money yo buy these thing. As it is, These thing make them spendthrift. It is make rubbi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, thus, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29591836735 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78204887059 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69387755102 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.5625864964 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8888888889 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289033483424 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730096064616 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076587341278 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143006297958 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669871942812 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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