Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
The best way to Improve good spirit in society could be done by build local facilities such as leisure centers. I disagree with that notion, the free of taxation and jobs available are the problem for increase the people soul.
Initially, taxation is the main problem in society, people have a tendency to unhappy with tax cost created by the government such as restaurant, hotel insurance taxation, while people still pay for children school and electricity. Putting more simply, free taxation would be provided a good community spirit. For example, in Finland, a wealthy country, taxation is free for several group of people such as poor and civil servant, while rich people have an obligation to pay more, and Finland is categorized as the happiest country.
Furthermore, job is the problem in society, unemployment produce people loss their spirit. It means that the government should have provided more job vacation in society, because without activities, people could becomes stress, and it is not good for community itself. For example, in Jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia, based on the research, it has many depression people, because of jobs available, so works could create good impact for community health.
In conclusion, building local facilities such as relax centers is not the best method for the authority to provided good community spirit in society, while free taxation and jobs available are the best way to foster good community spirit. Where possible, the legislator should create an act to regulate that the people does not pay tax anymore and the jobs would be available for all people without preferences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...pay more, and Finland is categorized as a happiest country. Furthermore, job i...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...t means that the government should have provide more job vacation in society because wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16165413534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63281657256 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496240601504 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0898414781 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181968956062 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921801115606 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785491346183 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141557924488 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603837889354 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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