Investment in local amenities such as leisure centers is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
In these days when citizens are being more stressed due to a huge amount of works, many ideas have been given to improve their physical health as well as their mental health. Therefore, it is said that modernizing and investing in amenities facilities is the best way for residents to relax. From my point of view, I agree with this solution.
First of all, entertainment centers tend to not focus on activities that related too much to technology devices. In contrast, a wide range of sports is included due to the fact that the citizens should focus more on their health instead of staying at home and being a couch potato in their leisure time. For instance, at the weekends, a majority of adults choose to stay at home and sleep all day while teenagers prefer hanging out with their friends in these leisure centers. This results in most middle-aged are easy be overweight than younger ones. Moreover, people not only benefit their health from sporty activities but also their mental health.
In addition, there are several solutions that have been discussed to solve the problem. Besides improving and modernizing sports centers, constructing more parks with diverse sports types of equipment is also seen as a benefit for citizens. Many employees these days are such busy bees that they can not spend time going to the gym. Thus, parks will be perfectly fit for those who are always busy because of their convenience and time-saving effect. For example, a worker can spend 30 minutes doing exercises in the park with available equipment, which saves a lot of time but he/she can stay healthy.
To sum up, not only physical health but also mental health, the government should concern about both issues and solutions in order to improve the social quality. However, the citizens themselves should also be aware of their health problems and voluntarily do exercises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95569620253 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51421212672 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6868856033 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106316105688 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03892018503 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366886283952 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675021438459 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182382593444 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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