It is believed that young people are more interested in international pop singers and movie stars then in history and historical people.why is this?
In recent years, celebrities from the music industry and film industry have been gaining a great deal of popularity throughout the world compared to the famous people from the old-age history. Most importantly, it has been a bone of contention among the critics regarding the underlying reasons pertaining to the biasness of people on celebrities.
The most prominent reason in the background is the tendency of the mass people to follow the lifestyle of the stars. For this reason, the die hard fans always try to mimic on what their heartthrob singer of actor is doing throughout the day. To exemplify this we can consider the crazy people regarding Shah Rukh Khan. Millions of fans are always try to imitate what this film star is doing, wearing, saying or even eating. Moreover, it is common human psychology that everybody wants to be famous. In this rat race, the fame of any well-recognized face serves the purpose of an inspiration. That is why, the street hawker, for example, who sells film magazines of on the streat, dream to be a movie star inspired by Amitabh Bacchan, the heroic film star of all age in India.
Another reason for this craziness can be explained by the promotional campaign run by the media to promote few upcoming celebs of different genre. In most cases, it is seen that the media is taking an important role in advertising them during an event or competition. Therefore, they the targeted audiences become influenced greatly and start following them closely. For example, I see the competitor singers of Indian Idol are being advertised for getting their public vote smoothly. However, this not done in case of historical people like the King Tipu Sultan. The reason behind this is the less focus of the media on those chapters that contribute to the disinterest of the general people on them.
To conclude, the popularity of the media people including music rock stars and giant of the television screens will be more in the coming days, albeit it is sometimes biased and blind. There no strong reason that people will start following the historical people drastically unless any move has been taken by the media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
... Rukh Khan. Millions of fans are always try to imitate what this film star is doing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an Idol are being advertised for getting their public vote smoothly. However, thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91232876712 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63729619243 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3524652548 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169633398895 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531651728016 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377452034968 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990204866311 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388862289668 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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