Nowadays, there is a debate that college students should stay in hostels instead of living with parents at home whereas other are against it. However, I agree that hostel life are beneficial for the students in many ways and the essay will discuss those in further paragraphs.
First of all, living far from home develops many personality traits in young children. In other words, they become responsible and self dependent for their daily routine tasks like ironing clothes and organizing their rooms. In addition, by managing their college schedules and personal work, college students learn time management skill as well. Thus, these skills will prove helpful for them while working in future to manage tasks efficiently and responsibly.
Furthermore, while sharing the rooms with other students, university students have to deal with different problems patiently. Also, they meet students from various cultures and learn about their cultural history. Additionally, college-going children improves interpersonal communication skills. Therefore, staying far from parents can be advantageous in many ways for youngsters.
However, living in home with parents, students feel safe and get love and care along with the moral support. But, parents can always be in touch with them via many social media apps like WhatsApp, Facebook and so on.
To conclude, despite of missing parent's love, care and moral support, students can develop many personality traits like responsibility, self dependency, interpersonal communication skills. I believe that hostel life days are golden days of life along with the exposure of real life experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to time'
Suggestion: to time
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...manage tasks efficiently and responsibly . Furthermore, while sharing the room...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, in addition, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.592 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78637910367 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0219483947 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326174603683 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107496626012 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797126101207 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177749738062 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716278161224 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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