It is undoubtedly true that the trend of watching movies in cinema halls significantly dropped nowadays. A group of people claims that the thrill of visiting cinemas will decrease in future as they are on the verge of their end. However, though I agree with this view, I believe that apart from decreasing popularity, movie theatres will never lose their place in people's heart and the essay will provide the reasons of it.
First of all, due to the advancement of technology and high speed internet, there are wide range of online platforms available for entertainment like Netflix and Prime video. While they provide time flexibility, they can not be as appealing as enjoying films in a theatre hall with gigantic screen and high quality loud speakers to feel all the beats of music and action.
Furthermore, second reason is the technology equipped in modern theatres. The experience of watching animated action movies with 3D and other technologies is far better than enjoying movies on TVs and tablets. In Canada, for example, film viewers can experience the vibrations in their seats according to the intensity of action scenes in D-box shows and can feel as if they are in the movies due to the 3D technology which is almost impossible to have it at home.
However, expensive movie tickets of cinemas have certainly contributed to increase the popularity of other platforms but it is not only enough to keep people away from luxurious theatres.
To conclude, I pen down by writing that I can see that the amazing experience and feel of enjoying movies in ultra-high tech and luxurious silver screens would not be replaced easily by any other options of entertainment especially by its cost-effective feature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, apart from, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02090592334 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77473140738 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5453670242 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144840727725 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059066289711 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701289897844 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078595690112 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829587982415 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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