It is irrefutable that more students are pursuing graduation than a couple of decades ago. Therefore, many people suggest that a number of students graduate each year is more than the need in a market. Hence, the government should reduce emphasis on acquiring college education whereas others offend this view. In the looming paragraph, the essay will delve into both sides in depth.
Considering the former view, the reason behind this is that the availability of the jobs in the market is less than the production rate of graduates, which has resulted in significant hike in unemployment among recent graduates. As a result, many countries are facing various economic problems such as poverty, famine and so on. In the long run, it may affect the mental health of families, especially the young generation. Overall, due to these reasons people are supporting this side.
While, on the other hand, everyone strives for well paid jobs to raise their standard of living. In other words, multinational companies hire people with masters and bachelors degrees and offer them enormous yearly packages. Consequently, modern era parents enforce their children to acquire a higher level of education rather than just studying till high school even though they have to pay expensive fees at universities.
To conclude, based on the cited arguments, I opine that there is nothing wrong in achieving university education but the government should maintain balance between the rates of the job availability for graduating students. This will greatly help to resolve this issue and may change the view of other people as well.
- Task 2 Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer 73
- Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than needed and that less emphasis should be placed on university education Others are of different opinion Discuss both views and state your own opinion 87
- In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it a valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility What is your opinion 61
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 73
- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents Do you agree or disagree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69804484666 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669201520913 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4317016907 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207212664675 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639282018912 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487484347549 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11916157336 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680392806322 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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