Crime is one of the most discussing topics in this era. There are many people who prefer to watch crime based TV shows over other genres and the essay intends to discuss the causes of this phenomenon and its effects at personal and community level.
There are some reason why people like movies produced on crime events. Firstly, the main reason is the crime scenes are relatable to the real life crimes happening around them such as pick-pocketing and fights between people. Secondly, movies and shows, which are full of crime and action, have suspense till the end which results as thrilling experience.
However, as everything has its effects on surroundings, this development also has some repercussions. First, due to habit of enjoying this kind of movies, people become aware about the methodology of the crime and they can protect themselves and their families in society. In addition, they can learn and educate their dependents how to deal with the consequences if they are stuck in it.
Furthermore, young children are fascinated by the modern tricks of committing a crime and it may provoke them to commit crime in such a way. For evidence, Drishyam, a bollywood movie, has shown that how a person ,who was watching many crime related movies, hid a murder of a boy without leaving any evidences.
To sum up, while crime shows are suspense thrillers, there are some consequences of this development like benefit of keeping updated oneself and one's family safe and how to face them, and can lead to commit a crime as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62792798422 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5480081044 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228067249496 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874202644524 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518794797474 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118800209741 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419892646498 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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