It is compulsory for children to attend school between the age of 5 and 16. Many people are in favor of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6 or 7, and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18. People of this view believe it is important for young children to spend more time with their parents, while they believe teenagers would gain more from staying in school longer. To what extent do you agree with this view?
School is necessary for development and mental growth of children. There are some people who believe that child have to start their schooling at age of 6 to 7 instead of 5 to 6 and they have to finish at age of 17 or 18.
When a child Start their school late means age of 6 to 7 than it get more time to stay with parents. Spending time is play vital role of development of brain and behavior in child. A person get a behavior and good habits from their parents. In small age child catch their parents skills and try to do a same movements. Living with parents is better for child to get knowledge about familiar traditions and culture. There is increase in communication skill and speaking power in child by spent time with their parents.
Starting a school at earlier age is beneficial for child who leave in nuclear family and their parents doing a job. At the earlier schooling child develop good skill in language and make independent person.
In a conclusion earlier schooling is beneficial but staying with their parents is the important for mental growth and behavior other than academic education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5508600613 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4728574525 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9090909091 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 7.06120827912 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28020671332 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1172013637 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110536169431 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209158697649 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14268960583 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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