It is compulsory for children to attend school between the ages of 5 and 16. Many people are in favor of raising the age at which children must start their schooling to 6 or 7, and the age at which they are allowed to stop to 17 or 18. People of this view believe it is important for young children to spend more time with their parents, while they believe teenagers would gain more from staying in school longer.
To what extent do you agree with this view.
Certainly, it is true that it is inevitable for children to attend school between the ages of 5 and 16. Many people believe, it would be great to raise the age at which children are must to go to school to 6 or 7, 17 or 18 at which they are enabled to put a break to their education for some time. I disagree with the statement and from my point of view there are certain reasons that will definitely prove my point.
To begin with, children are able to grab some social skills that will certainly prove to be effective as they start their schooling through staying with their parents. Consequently, it would allow them to interact with their other classmates and with teachers also. However, there are many children whose both parents works worldwide and appoints a babysitter for taking care of their child. This childcare might be proved too expensive for them. Similarly, this will put an impact over their pocket as they are paying house bills and other house expenses.
Moving ahead, there are many pupils who are bright and passes their examination with flying colors, but there are some pupils who have no interest in studies or who are weak in studies and are not able to succeed in their exams. There parents are paying a large amount from their pocket to schools in form of school fees. However, if they are accustom with the result of their child and are known of the capability of their child, it would be better to have the child helping in family earning. And also can help the father if they have their family venture like agriculture, shops, and many more.
In a nutshell, it can be said that age limit should be kept as it is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... to raise the age at which children are must to go to school to 6 or 7, 17 or 18 at whi...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...heir other classmates and with teachers also. However, there are many children whose...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
... also. However, there are many children whose both parents works worldwide and appoin...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accustomed'.
Suggestion: accustomed
...rm of school fees. However, if they are accustom with the result of their child and are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, similarly, so, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53177257525 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2641078311 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4948603389 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352167660082 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124046226402 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140379309749 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211244999734 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178892084976 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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