It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
Nowadays, doing physical activities is hard for citizens in urban areas. This can stem from many reasons, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted.
There are a number of factors responsible for people in the cities not doing exercises, the most important of which are heavy work load and the lack of large and green spaces. To begin with, city dwellers are facing with a great amount of working load, which requires much time and energy to complete. This leads to people with poor mental and physical conditions when coming back homes, resulting in the fact that they would prefer to do relaxing activities such as watching films or playing video games rather than get involved in any action. Another causes worth mentioning is that due to the development in cities, most of them are covered by high buildings instead of large and green areas. As a result, city citizens do not have enough appropriate space to do more exercises.
Several measures can be taken to solve this issue. One solution should be considered is that companies and schools in cites can encourage staff and students to do physical exercises by including doing morning exercise as a regulation of organizations. In this way, they can help people to form a healthy habit. Furthermore, local authorities can hold monthly sport competition with appealing prizes to attract city dwellers’ participants, giving them chances to do physical activities.
In conclusion, the fact that people in urban areas do not get enough physical exercise results from several causes, and there are some actions can be taken to address this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05243445693 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66610375745 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3931563452 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215006442038 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770150222176 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397052426449 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137649384049 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270014283693 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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