The modern society has definitely been becoming a worth place to live but no one can deny the fact that it is also associated with a wide range of detrimental impacts upon our residents, making us vulnerable to lots of pressure. A number of main culprits of this problem will be discussed before some feasible measures are stated to prevent the issue from further exacerbated.
There are two major factors in terms of reasons which make modern people think that they are under lots of pressure. The first and foremost reason is subjective to the heavy workload. Nowadays, it is not uncommon to see many people working all day all night. They nowadays tend to virtually their whole of time to work in order to ensure material well- being, which means that it seems to be difficult for them to gather together with the whole family to wind down, especially when the work timing is different. That drives people to feel lonely and stressful since they get no assistance from their beloved ones in the crisis time. In addition, modern technological breakthroughs is also partly blamed to make modern citizens even stressful. As there is no escape from always- on connectivity, workers now can never get away from their work and problems. Even when they are on a vacation, few people can resist the temptation to check their work emails. These two mentioned reasons have been begetting to the rising stress of people in the current world.
As serious as the problem may seem, some definite actions could be taken to tackle it. The most crucial key to beat stress is to look for meaning in life. Instead of rushing after material gains, we should look inward and connect with our own nature. Setting priorities is equally after. We should ask ourselves what we want to achieve in our lives and head towards them at our own pace. This approach actually makes life even less stressful. In addition, it is obviously important for us to widen our circle of friends. True friendships can hold the power to help us enjoy meaningful and complete lives. Listening to other' stories, sharing confidences or just simply going shopping together with close friends are totally good at reducing stress from our daily lives. Moreover, I think that a good therapy could also be doing some yoga, going to the gym, having a good massage and why not go for a small break.
In conclusion, even though the work pressure and the widespread impacts of advanced technology make modern citizens stress out a lot, the issue could be bridged if we thought positively and didn't give stress the power of being a part in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majors'?
Suggestion: majors
...rom further exacerbated. There are two major in terms of reasons which make modern p...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...be bridged if we thought positively and didnt give stress the power of being a part i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76444444444 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45678099136 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568888888889 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9770544524 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230788728061 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549083669241 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396613648828 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127181945118 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138444129464 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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