it has become very common for people to borrow money . most of people have a credit card a mortgage and often they will buy a car on credit as well . is this goid idea or is it too risky? discuss both views and give ur in opinion
Technology is developing day by day . This advancement leads to various changes in the society . One of them is card money rather than cash . Bill paying , owing house , buying motor vehicles and so on all are possible with the help of credit or debit cards .This modernization has both pros and cons ,I will discuss both of these in the subsequent paragraphs with relevant views.
first and foremostly , safety is one of the major issue specially in the case of money . With the help of these cards one will be able to become tension free because they can carry credit cards with them rather than cash . When they need money they can simply withdraw needed amount of cash through nearby ATM. furthermore, some people are not good in maths so there are always chances of frod with then even by their own relatives . This thing bring conflicts in the society to curb out this problem this kind of money is only a suitable solution.
On the flipside , it has various disadvantages.sometimes it happens that one will want to transfer money in the account of their loved ones but due to some hurdles it will deposits in account of unknown person . This will create several issues and misunderstanding in the society. Moreover , if one will buy products on the basis of credit card then they have to pay high interest on it .
To recapitulate , in my opinion its merits overways the demerits and it is also clear from the above stated information. so ,I think that it a good development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6833976834 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.723225824 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0986581741 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234831754314 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691442631542 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552656600399 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127037345577 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613016838582 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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