It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong on early age. Punishment is neccessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?what sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Punishment plays a harmful role in modern lives. Naturally, punishment has a powerful influence on the way we live and and its impact is often negative .although we might not like to admit it ,punishment has created certain unpleasant consequences for children. the present essay aims to discuss that punishment is harmful for at least three main reasons.
first and foremost punishment can be very damaging to those people who try it .for one thing, people who were punished by their parents in their childhood have a mental problems .for instance ,some people who suffer from anxiety and depression were punished because of their Marks and so on. Another thing is that punishment is causing unbelievable attempting suicide aming teenagers. As an illustration, in developed and developing countries some teachers and parents are so strict about teenagers behaviour or lessons so that teenagers get pressure under a lot of stress. they think that one and one way to get rid of a stress is committing suicide.
alternatively it is generally admitted that punishment can damage people's body .in the first place ,some corporal punishment can have a negative effects on people's health. an example may help clarify the point .some families will punish their children by hitting them servely hurt children's body in bad ways. in the second place, corporal punishment can cause children to have serious injuries .all in all, punishment has negative influence much more than you think it does.
the last but not least, punishment can damage families relationship .proffessor Smith the head of Psychology department at Berlin university asserts that punishment causes children not to have good relationship with their parents also parents need an education in how to behave with their children. In European countries European,people are aware that punishment not only being helpful but also makes people have bad relationship with their families .The latest figures released by the world Health Organisation reflects that that about 78% of developed countries inform parents to prevent from punishment by education through television ,books and so on. On other another word ,families has a has an important part in society so that government try to help families have true relationship without any punishment .to sum up,it can be stated that punishment has some drawbacks.However,the cruical question is:can we really solve the problem of punishment in general ?only time will tell, but in the meantime punishment continues to influence every aspects of everyday life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, so, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, for one thing, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28078817734 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86576751605 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544334975369 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.838220716 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.909090909 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9090909091 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6363636364 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193779125489 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917926261932 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268908253208 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130912059457 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266423606409 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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