It is important that everybody needs high income in his job or career. Do you agree or disagree?
Good income is first step whenever someone has to choose their job. Actually, it is true that everybody give importance to income while deciding their job or career opportunities.
Actually, everybody is living in time of inflation. So, having high income, it becomes easy for them to make life comfortable and fulfil requirements of their family. It is a main point. Today, the role of money is at high position in our life. By using money, individual can purchase things, which maybe expensiveor cheap which can make life easy and satisfied someone's dreams. Such as car, clothes, house, food and so on. These goods can only be purchased with the money. Anyway, money is our need. So, no one would be fine without it. It is possible if people have good job opportunity which offer high income to them. Moreover, there are number of individuals who are highly educated and have valuable degrees. They want to find a best job according to their degree which has been pursued by them. For instance, my cousin brother has pursued M.Tech degree. He is working in Chandigarh Engineer Department and monthly earns two lakh fifty thousand rupees. He enjoy his life and very satisfied with it as well as does all activities with help of his income which he wants to do. As a matter of fact, today's generation wants cost equal to their qualities which are present in them.
However, some people disagree with this notion because they think that it depends on someone's working experiance. Sometimes, it seems impossible to have a good job with high income in starting of career. So, hard work is key to success for them. Secondly, they also believe that emotions and relationships cannot be purchased with help of money. Sometimes, someone with small amount of money remains happy than wealthy individuals. They sometimes suffer from stress ,due to this, it can lead to death. For example, in my neighbourhood, a gentleman is living in Australia and works as a civil engineer. He is very rich as well as married. He fulfil hus family's needs but he is mentally disturbed. He is suffering from depression. So, it is not mean that less salary amount is bad for a person on some factors such as work experiance education qualification,work mode and so on.
Conclusively, high income is required to make life easy to live and by this, person can get taste of comfort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ave valuable degrees. They want to find a best job according to their degree whic...
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Line 3, column 849, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
...stance, my cousin brother has pursued M.Tech degree. He is working in Chandigarh Eng...
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Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...arns two lakh fifty thousand rupees. He enjoy his life and very satisfied with it as ...
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Line 3, column 1127, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants cost" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'cost' or 'to be cost'.
Suggestion: cost; to be cost
...matter of fact, todays generation wants cost equal to their qualities which are pres...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...duals. They sometimes suffer from stress ,due to this, it can lead to death. For e...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'fulfils'.
Suggestion: fulfils
... He is very rich as well as married. He fulfil hus familys needs but he is mentally di...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lys needs but he is mentally disturbed. He is suffering from depression. So, it is...
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Line 5, column 856, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , work
... work experiance education qualification,work mode and so on. Conclusively, high ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81773399015 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66974623397 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6217522182 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191631513198 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461151749846 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673038428479 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134467810294 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686299795414 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.