Mobile phones with internet access will reduce unemployment in country. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, a host of problems are prevailing in the world. Due to unemployment, our country is not progressing. It has been generally witnessed that some people argue that government should give every unemployed individual a mobile phone with internet access, so that, it helps to reduce the trouble of unemployment.I disagree to this topic.
As we know, some individuals misuse the mobile phones with internet access by chatting, gaming, stealing money by hacking and so on. It is not an easy way of reduce unemployment while it sometimes waste someone's time. Many websites contains offensive contents which cause harmful affect on mind of them because some sites show violent or sexual images or videos which lead to negativity. As a matter of it, people become lazy and careless about his future. Hence, it again lead to unemployment. For instance, a couple of years ago, reliance company which is in India, gave a free facility of data to all who had jio sim, due to this, there was not any difference seen. They only wasted their time on internet. Moreover, these days, people want to earn money by hook or by crook. Crime has risen considerably. So, this is duty of government to aware people from cyber crime. Furthermore, youngsters attract towards fashion and brands. They would do online shopping instead of online business.
However, some people believe that everything has reached on peak of success with the help of internet. Furthermore, education become easy. For instance, nowadays, in lockdown, teachers get employed on internet by educate students. It is quite evidance that people make channels on youtube, facebook etcetera for online business of everything. For example, some people give beauty tips, sell utensils, sell shoes etcetera and earn good profit.
To sum up, government has not been showing gravity on this issue for many years. Internet is embodiment of knowledge. So, internet had better be used for getting employment and definitely, it can diminate the unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18042813456 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75072670316 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6416298038 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.652173913 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2173913043 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214509228286 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485983537425 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072898070932 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136774446093 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086429811933 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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