Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Invention of technologies has increased day by day and these have crucial role in every individual's life. For example, school management, business companies etcetera, complete half of their duty by using applications on which online lessons has been taken such as zoom, whatsapp and so on. So, advantages of online business meetings and training outweigh its disadvantages.
Firstly, online meetings and training held in some companies which save individual's time of travelling. They can do work from their homes with comfortable way and with accordingly. By this, they give their quality time to their family members while regular going employers have no extra time to enjoy conversation with them. Even they visit their home just for take a nap. There are numerous online businesses done with online orders or by video chat. For example, my mother is a good cook and she got training by atending online cooking classes. Moreover, she is doing her cooking business online with large cooking firms. Secondly, it saves fuels such as petrol and diesel because these are natural resources which are in danger. To save them, online classes are beneficial. In addition,it also helps to control air and nosie pollution. If employers do work from home by attending online meeting, then, it is not necessary for them to go there by vehicles such as car, bike, public transportation and so on. These create a lot of pollution which is not suitable for our environment.
However, it has disadvantages too. Actually,online business meetings and trainings sometimes lead to lack of concentration among employers. For instance, there may be great disturbance which is being created by other family members such as children. One of my cousin works for Engineering Department in Chandigarh as a civil engineer. During lockdown, he had to do work by joining online meetings of his office. However, he got disturbance because his own children created lot of noise. As a matter of fact, he felt irritated. Most importantly, development and financial level do not increase same as face to face meetings and planings. The main problem is that some able employers done their work in simple and easy way if they may under supervision of their boss.
In conclusion, online business meetings and training is easy and comfortable while it is also annoying and unsatisfied. Well, it has a great impact on society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...or example, school management, business companies etcetera, complete half of their duty b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , online
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87288673558 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552429667519 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3234899146 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0384615385 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57692307692 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198607800558 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598569276782 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750705206257 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137460289807 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219134616049 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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