It is important to have huge public spaces like parks and squares in towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree with the given statement?
It is argued that open premises are crucial to the layout of a municipality. Although there are some clear advantages of these constructions, I disagree that towns and cities are in dire need of larger public places and will further elaborate in this essay.
It is understandable why open spaces such as parks and squares are considered as important factors to urban life. An evident explanation is that such places can provide the residents with peace of mind after a day of hectic schedules. A variety of recreational activities can be conducted thanks to the existence of spacious open premises, namely skateboarding, dancing or cycling. Moreover, public places with historical background can also attract tourists; therefore enhance the tourism industry of a city or town. Ba Dinh Square is a prime example for the case as what happened there has marked a milestone in the history of Vietnam.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits, I believe that erecting larger public premises can be indeed counter-productive. As the matter of fact, populations of urban cities are increasing inexorably; there for a shortage of available land. If open squares and parks are constructed, it will narrow down the space dedicated for residential housing and commercial premises, which are regarded as far more essential to the society.
Another justification is that allocations for these constructions can take up a large part in the municipal budget. I am convinced that this money should be diverted more properly in order to address emerging problems such as the deterioration of health service or the dire strains of the environment. Moreover, excessive number of parks and squares be a waste of money and land as they are disused, namely the abandoned Tuoi Tre park in Hanoi.
In conclusion, while there are benefits of erecting larger public premises, it is my firm conviction that the number of parks and squares should be reduced to make space for other constructions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22884012539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14812838928 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557993730408 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7567075723 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196158414614 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062531060151 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561163533788 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107550205026 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337754451072 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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