These days, it is vital for an early age to learn the difference between morality and injustice. It is necessary to punish a child by parents or teacher if they do wrong or mistakes, and giving them the reason that why they got punishment.
Children are at such age of their life when being to learn and meeting new people. They are curiosities and excited by things happen around them. In this case, sometimes they do not know how to behaviours in a positive way, then they do on the wrong way. Hence, it is essential that they need someone like parents or teacher to instruct or advise them. Actually, parents are the most significant to learn their children be knowing of morally and immoral.
Nowadays, children are easily getting an influence by electronic media as telephone, TV, iPad and so forth. Thus, it is impossible to protect them getting exposed to external environment. It is mandatory for parents or teacher to make them aware of ethics and injustice at this age and some punishment if its needs. For example, Chaing Mai Nanny's nursery in Thailand asks children to clean their rooms or exercise as a punishment.
In conclusion, it seems to me that I completely agree with this topic that sometimes children should get a punishment if it is necessary to protect them from doing wrong behaviours. However, the punishment should not affect a child in negative or cause them a physical; rather it must be in constructive and reasonable for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80632411067 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69922566335 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5513439211 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319874222017 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106957671504 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755081778421 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203168577825 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566487931897 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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