It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
irrefutably, in this modern globalization era augmented new various technology day by day in our life, in our society use new devices and machinery systems due to improve the development of the society as well as alleviate our traditional culture and old history, I think that evolve new technology is good for the everyone but also some drawback related to diminishing the history and culture.
To begin with, there are a lot of predominant reasons why technology is good for the community and how our culture will be decline. first and foremost, nowadays a plethora of people use superior devices such as computer laptops mobile Phones, television and many more as compared to less use radio. The second reason, is ample of people use the internet and abundant applications like Facebook WhatsApp also many websites so they can easily talk with each other no matter how they are away from the place. For instance, in this era, many students use new online applications which are very beneficial for academic purposes.
Moreover, there are also other reasons to using contemporary technology. firstly, there are immensely evolve new medical machinery systems such as x-ray, MRI, sonography which are uses for many medical problems nowadays. In addition, to these, improve new transportation modes amenities so, people can easily ride and go from one place to another. I believe that this technology is very useful for the community.
However, many new technologies replace our culture such as handwriting letters is the replace of computer and mobile phones, not only but also radio and workers to replace new robotic gadgets.
In recapitulation, I certainly believe that improving new technology is more beneficial for the community as well as improving economic level also.
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...ity as well as improving economic level also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20557491289 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83945403929 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8357674452 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.818181818 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140200778722 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058991165629 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684078556224 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816486114002 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037960768869 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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