It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
As technology advances, it is unavoidable that traditional cultures will be lost. Traditional cultures and technology are mutually exclusive. I partly agree with this view. Nevertheless, it is not true with some unaffected people by technology and the modern world.
Firstly, technological advancement helps people be aware of the cultures which exist in other countries. Take Viet Nam as an example, This country has many heritages, values, and customs, but it was only after taking the photos about this beauty by the world media that the tourist from around the world came to enjoy its traditions.
Secondly, modern technological equipment and expertise helped to restore many long-lost cultures. For instance, math recipes were being proven again and created more and more. Another example, some traditional house was repaired by advanced technology but didn't change their nature.
Thirdly, because of modern machinery, many traditional skills have been lost. Craftsmen are decreasing because the machines have done almost everything. However, we must accept the fact that the world is developing. we need a good product and a large amount in a short time so we can not cling to the manual methods of doing a thing.
In conclusion, we need to have a well-balanced view to get the benefits of both to the fullest. In spite of the fact that traditional cultures and technology are incompatible, the traditional cultures are the source for the development and improvement of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: didn't
...was repaired by advanced technology but didnt change their nature. Thirdly, because...
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Suggestion: We
... the fact that the world is developing. we need a good product and a large amount ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30379746835 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9666078248 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0282039141 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397153934499 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140450483356 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140167772916 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225336322003 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166873489025 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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