It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the near future the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that watching a movie on television or a computer can be more convenient than going to the cinema, and the number of people going to the cinema in the future will dramatically decline. From my point of view, I agree with this statement. However, I would not agree that the popularity of cinemas will decline in the future.
On the one hand, watching films on television or computer can be more convenient than watching at the cinema. People can save a lot of money by watching films at home. For example, when going to the cinema, people have to pay a large amount of money such as travel costs, or food costs. Not only travel, and food costs but also ticket fees have become too expensive nowadays for many people who want to go to the cinema. Besides, during Covid-19, when people can not go out of their homes, and the cinema is being closed by restrictive rules, many new streaming platforms such as Netflix, Disney +, or Crunchyroll have become popular. These platforms can help people to access many categories of films at anywhere, and anytime, with a suitable price.
On the other hand, there are many reasons why watching movies at the cinema is better than watching on television, or computer. One of the reasons is that watching movies at the theatre can bring people a better experience. For instance, at the cinema, it has great sound systems, movie effects, or a bigger screen than watching at home. These can make viewers feel more engaged in the movie, and give them good feelings, or emotions. Another reason is that people can watch movies earlier than watch at home. Most of the movies are exclusively by the theatre, so if people want to watch a film such as Avatar 2, they have to wait a few months for the streaming platforms to buy the copyright to play them on their online platforms.
To conclude, although watching movies on a small screen is more appropriate than watching on a big screen, I think the number of people coming to the cinema will not go down in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62049861496 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44541146628 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3879757196 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357317177963 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140298154926 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120610406585 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274616631491 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120678304465 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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